안녕하세요, ed:m 아이엘츠입니다.

문의주신 질문에 대한 답변드립니다.

 

정답은 정답지 기준의 C-F-A-D-B-E가 맞습니다.

 

Ex2를 살펴보면요.

This is due to the fact that only the privileged can afford private schools, which tend to offer a good education.

For example, many manual jobs are done by the underprivileged.  If people are unable to save money, they are not able to offer a privileged life to their children.

There are several reasons why the gap between the wealthy and the penniless is getting wider.

What is more, it is a well-known fact that poor people can often only get badly paid jobs.

Consequently, the poor are unable to achieve social mobility.

First of all, research has shown that the underprivileged are often deprived of a good education.

 

답대로 하면,

There are several reasons why the gap between the wealthy and the penniless is getting wider.

First of all, research has shown that the underprivileged are often deprived of a good education.

This is due to the fact that only the privileged can afford private schools, which tend to offer a good education.

What is more, it is a well-known fact that poor people can often only get badly paid jobs.

For example, many manual jobs are done by the underprivileged.  If people are unable to save money, they are not able to offer a privileged life to their children.

Consequently, the poor are unable to achieve social mobility.

로,

First of all로 운을 떼고, underprivileged가 good education을 받지못하는 이유 부가설명 나오구요, What is more로 그 다음 아이디어를 전개하고, for example로 예시를 들어주고, consequently로 결과를 말해줍니다.

 

리즈 선생님의 예시에서는

This is due to the fact that only the privileged can afford private schools, which tend to offer a good education.

 

Consequently, the poor are unable to achieve social mobility.

교육을 받지 못했기 때문에 (consequently) 사회적 신분 상승을 할 수 없다 라고 하고,

What is more, it is a well-known fact that poor people can often only get badly paid jobs.

For example, many manual jobs are done by the underprivileged.  If people are unable to save money, they are not able to offer a privileged life to their children.

뒤에 부가 설명이 나오는 구조를 택하셨습니다.

 

교육을 받지 못함으로 신분 상승이 불가하다는 명제를 가정하면, 논리적으로 틀린 전개는 아니지만,

“best answer”는 답지에 있는 답이 될 것 같습니다!

 

학습에 도움이 되셨길 바랍니다.^^