선생님들이 직접 성실하게 답변 드립니다!

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아카데믹
헤더
실전 점수보장 프리패스+첨삭
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2018-11-29 09:47
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안녕하세요? 헤더 선생님 제가 강의를 듣고 스피킹 연습을 해봤는데

제가 적은 문장이 맞는 지 확인하고 싶어서요!!

첨삭은 wirting만 가능해서... 이걸 여기에 여쭤봐도 되는지 잘 모르겠네요ㅠ.ㅠ

I'm currenlty working as a Teaching Assistant in Nursing college. I've been working as a TA for 3 years now.

I support nursing college professor by preparing their lecture, and work with nursing college student. For example, giving a guide for nursing college student as a clinical instructor(실습지도), and participating in developing simulation scenario.

I work happily right now. But you know, TA is not a permanent job. Although I finished the Master’s course just this year, I decided not to go for Ph.D. And I try to move to administrative team in the hospital. I can apply to that kind of team because where I work in is the university which has hositals(대학병원..)Actually I want to work in public relation department in the hospital. As I have a experience working as a Nurse for 5years, So I know well how the hospital works. I am also interested in writing articles and meet new people.

부담을 드렸다면 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ

감사합니다!
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  • 2018-11-29 17:19
    안녕하세요 지윤님.

    첫번째, 두번째 문장은 괜찮아서 생략할게요.
    세번째 답변은 조금 긴 감이 있어요. 제 나름대로 좀 정리해볼게요.

    Actually my work is satisfying but I really want to transfer to administrative team in the hospital, particularly in public relation department. As I have work experience as a nurse for 5 years, I know well about how the hospital works.

    마지막에 붙이신 문장은 그다지 개연성은 없어보이네요... 너무 많은 정보를 얘기하기보단 그 문제에서 요구하는 것 위주로 간략하게 답변을 구성해보세요.
    열공하세요~:)